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The Sneeze


Little old ladies discussing plots
From their favorite TV shows
The sun catches my eye
And I cover my nose as I sneeze
They turn, suddenly aware of my existence
Regard me for a second through their bifocals
Brutual scrutiny, relaxing after a bit
They return to their debate,
Matlock versus Walker,
And I am forgotten to the critics
As they sip their morning coffee

– guess who, 03.06.00

5 thoughts on “

  1. very interesting…….

    hi…….i just stumbled in to ur weblog following a link…….. and it’s worth stumbling here……..

    keep smiling….

  2. Matlock.  Definately Matlock.

  3. Oh…Walker…he wears wranglers, can do Kung Fu!

    Mitch

  4. Yes. Matlock!

    And great imagery!

    You and GudKarma should start a poetry site, or somethin’. You guys are too good for us. 😉

    The Duchess

  5. I love this snapshot! Great stuff! Thank you!

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